A Black Hole
By Drogo
Who needs a scope to see the dark-
ness deep within my soul?
I simply need to be alone
to see there's a hole.
This hole of seeming emptiness
Yet pulls with all its might,
And seems to take in anything
Except for any light.
When the light will ignite it bright,
Darkness will screech and rebel.
Why is it I still long for that
Which makes my soul hell?
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Drogo, you're putting the rest of us to shame with your prolific posting. I like the revisions to the last stanza--eliminating the "do/does" for the sake of meatier words. The that/which alteration runs much smoother as well, like a finely tuned V6...
You may now lambaste my latest posting (see above)...
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